Tuesday, November 18, 2008

Corrections in response to critique

Thank you for your input. I have made the changes you suggested.One of the critiques of my poster was that there was not a flow to the design. I thought perhaps if I lightened the background it would not distract the eye away from the fish in the bag and the question mark as much. Let me know what you think now.

The image of the goldfish has been replaced with a high resolution photograph rather then the image that I pulled off google, and I have dropped the opacity of the goldfish so that it looks like it is inside the bag. I have added some color to the top of the ziploc baggy, so that it doesn't blend in quite so much with the buildings. Although it was not suggested, I decided to slightly drop the opacity of the bag in order to make it look more realistic.

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