Corrections in response to critique

Thank you for your input. I have made the changes you suggested.One of the critiques of my poster was that there was not a flow to the design. I thought perhaps if I lightened the background it would not distract the eye away from the fish in the bag and the question mark as much. Let me know what you think now.

The image of the goldfish has been replaced with a high resolution photograph rather then the image that I pulled off google, and I have dropped the opacity of the goldfish so that it looks like it is inside the bag. I have added some color to the top of the ziploc baggy, so that it doesn't blend in quite so much with the buildings. Although it was not suggested, I decided to slightly drop the opacity of the bag in order to make it look more realistic.

Project 3 - Sustainability Poster

This is my final poster design. The poster will be printed at 18 X 24.

Project 3 - Sustainability Poster

Here is the rough for my poster design.

Project 3 - Sustainability Poster

Here are the rest of my second round thumbnails.

Project 3 - Sustainability Poster

The next part of the project was designing the poster. I had an idea early in the design process which made it a little difficult to think beyond my initial concept. But by going through the design process (first round, second round, and rough) I was able to "see" what the design looked like on paper and tweak the design to make it more visually appealing. Here are my first and second round thumbnails.

Project 3 - Sustainability Poster

The objective for this project was to design a poster for a hypothetical not-for-profit organization advocating sustainability. It was a two part project. First, we had to create a name and a logo for the organization and then design a poster that would communicate sustainability. Here are my thumbnails for my logo design and the final logo design.